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Hi guys. My name is Daniel and I am currently going to an international school in Daejon, Korea. I am currently 14 years old. I have created a blog for my English 9 class and hope you guys enjoy it :) Have fun~

Monday, 26 October 2009

Guess The MOOD

It was on a one rainy day that it all happened. The sky clouds were black as darkness, and so was my feeling that day. I stood in front of what used to be my grandma, now just a corp on a wooden box. I couldn't believe that this was all happening. There were people in black suits and dress surrounding the dead corp, moaning and weeping, for the same reason that I had tears dripping down my cheek. I have known my grandma for my entire life, spending my 14 years with her in the same house. The last words I spoke to her was yesterday when I said "good night", not knowing that it would be my last time saying it to her. Now, nothing felt important. Not my grades, not my friends, not my life, nothing. I could only stand there, thinking of only one thing: "Don't leave me... don't leave me... don't leave...."
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  1. Nemo23226 October 2009 at 22:18

    Sad.......................):

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  2. Brian26 October 2009 at 22:23

    1. I think the mood is sad/downbeat.
    2. I realized it because the setting was gloomy, and he used adjetives like dead, and it gave a basic understanding of what he meant.

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  3. Nemo23226 October 2009 at 22:24

    sad....ur grandma just DIED..."corpse"..interesting way to say things

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  4. Jon Kim26 October 2009 at 22:25

    1) sad
    2) last sentence don't leave me don't leave me

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  5. Daniel26 October 2009 at 22:25

    MYYYYYYYYYY MOOD WAS SADNESS!

    I tried to sound sad and show my sadness. Also I tried using emotions such as crying.

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